7. In his homework assigment, Gerald writes that he would rid the world of 3 things. What 3 things would you rid the world of? Stick to concrete items, and back up your choices with personal reasons why you are eliminating them.
You need a good topic sentence.
1) First, I would get rid of fire ants,because when they bite it burns and makes me angry.They also swarm on you and are hard to get off. Thats why I would get rid of fire ants.
2)Second,I would get rid of cats,because all they do is tear stuff up like furniture, and if you wanted some nice furniture forget it with cats,I hate them.
3)Third and last,I would get rid of pancakes because all they are is just waffles without the design.Pancakes suck and that is what I would get rid of lastly.
You need a good topic sentence.
1) First, I would get rid of fire ants,because when they bite it burns and makes me angry.They also swarm on you and are hard to get off. Thats why I would get rid of fire ants.
2)Second,I would get rid of cats,because all they do is tear stuff up like furniture, and if you wanted some nice furniture forget it with cats,I hate them.
3)Third and last,I would get rid of pancakes because all they are is just waffles without the design.Pancakes suck and that is what I would get rid of lastly.